English number

这段话有几个语病。单复数不统一，take time用错等等

看看这样是不是好些：

When I hear a lot of English numbers, I tend to respond slowly. It takes me a long time to find out  what they mean in Chinese. Then I have to stop whenever a number is mentioned and as a result, I will miss the following sentences.

Could you share how you treat this kind of situation? 宾语从句里要用陈述句语序哦。.