I just saw the rule of this section -- No Chinese. Ok let's say it in English although I prefer Chinese
'to do something' is a phrase, not a sentence. But after 'Please', you need a sentence. It took me a while to figure out this 'why'. But you can tell 'please to ..' doesn't sound right by just reading it. That's why reading is important.
Another problem of your essay is, unlike Chinese sentences, English sentences can't be connected by comma. If your sentence is complete, use a period.
Hope you don't mind
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