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[外语] 《卖炭翁》英文版---初一男生的佳作

《卖炭翁》英文版---初一男生的佳作

初一两位小男生纯属好玩,翻译了他们刚刚学过的古文卖炭翁,个人觉得还不错,显摆下
Charcoal Man1
He cuts the wood and burns it for charcoal in the southern hill .
His face is full of the color of ash and smoke.
His fingers are black while his hair white.
What does he do with the money of selling charcoal? Just for the food to eat and the clothes to wear. Although his coat is thin, he hopes the weather would become colder.
For the cold weather will keep the charcoal's price. At night it snowed heavily outside the city.
At dawn hie drove his charcoal car and crushed the ice.
The sun went on the top of the sky,while the ox is tired and he was hungry.
Then they rested outside the southern gate in the mug.
Two riders came near. Who can they be?
Ah! They are the emissary of the emperor in yellow. They took the emperor’s order and commanded the man. Then they turn the car to the north and let the ox go.
A car loaded more than one thousand kilos of charcoal.
They drive the car away. What can the old man say! Some silk in red and some gauze .
This is the payment they fasten to the ox's head.

Charcoal Man2
Charcoal man cut down firewood and burned charcoals in south mountain.His face was full of dust and its colour was grey.His eyebrows were gray and his ten fingers were black.What did he do after he sold charcoal?He bought the clothes that he wore and the food that he ate.It was poor that he wore very little clothes,but he was worried about his charcoal sold cheap,and he also wanted the weather colder.It snowed heavily last night outside the city.He drove his carriage with charcoal and grinded the ice rut.The cow was tired and the man was hungry.The sun was high in the sky.He rested near the mud near the south gate.Who was coming with a complacent smile?It was the men in yellow clothes with white shirts.He had the writ from the emperor and said the rescript.He forwarded the cow and hooted it with bringing north.A carriage of charcoal,more than one thousand kilos of charcoal,the men in palace took it away and the charcoal man was pity about it.They took away the cow and gave him half of cloth just as the money to the charcoal..

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很棒!加油。.

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初一的孩子翻译的,好厉害啊!.

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很不错,第二个翻译得更好一些。.

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谢谢鼓励,他们还打算翻伤仲永.

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回复 1楼arcticart 的帖子

哈哈 强!.

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强!.

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厉害的.

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回复 1楼arcticart 的帖子

可以同时列为语文与英文考题 .

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