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发表于 2013-7-31 13:51
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作文系列（2） 人物类 My father is always my hero
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下面是第二篇。
my father is my hero
Every child has a good and great father,and so do I.My dad played a very important role in my life and I have every reason to believe he is always my hero.
My father always stands in the center of my life, from past till now and possibly in the future. My family was rather poor when I was in childhood. We didn't have our own house and had to live in a small room rented from my father's factory. The room was so small that there was little space for people to walk. I didn't have my own bed and had to share the bed with my parents. This was terrible both for my parents and me.
But father made this all different! He never complained or lost his temper. Instead, he always told me to smile, whenever and wherever. At that time, though we were poor, happiness and sunshine filled our home.Now ,with his hard work, father has his own business. We also have got our own house. Life becomes happier and happier. I learnt a lot from my father.
Years passed, my father is over 45 now. It is time for me to look after him . Here I really want to say " I love you ,dad, you are always the hero in my life.
先熟背下列单词词组，扫清词汇障碍。如果还有生词没有列出，请自行查出，标识。
hero 英雄
role 角色
important 重要的
play a very important role 扮演着一个非常重要的角色
in the center of my life 在我生命的中央
future 未来
rather 相当
childhood 孩提时代
own 自己的
rent 租来的
space 空间，地方
terrible 可怕的
both 都
different 不同的
complain 抱怨
lose one's temper 发火
whenever 无论何时
wherever 无论何地
happiness 快乐
fill 填满
business 公司，生意
happier and happier 越来越快乐
look after sb. 照顾某人
though 虽然
instead 代替，而不是
over 超过
以上都是初中常用单词，提早背出有用。背前单词要借助工具熟读。
好句解读&语法浅析，背出默写并可仿写
My father always stands in the center of my life, from past till now and possibly in the future.
译文：爸爸总在我生命的中心，从过去到现在也许一直到将来。
（如可仿写一个已经分别的朋友.. ... He is always in the corner of my memory, from past till now and of course forever
他总在我记忆深处，从过去到现在一直到永远。这样的句子就是在中考作文中也是可以作为亮点句加分的，因为看多了干巴巴的句子，突然看到这样的好句，会让人眼前一亮)
并且注意本句中时态运用：
爸爸一贯做的事情，用一般现在时态，三单+动词复数
全文时态清晰，从过去谈到现在，时态使用从一般过去时态到一般现在时态。
也不乏好句，再如：
My family was rather poor when I a was in childhood. 注意本句时间状语从句的使用。
a small room rented from my father's factory. rented过去分词作后置定语，意思为从我爸爸厂里借来的小房子。
The room was so small that there was little space for people to walk. so...that...句型，这样。。。以至于。。。
意思为：房间是这样小以至于都没有走路的地方。
At that time, though we were poor, happiness and sunshine filled our home. 注意though引导的让步状语从句，该单词使用时不可以和but同时用，这是中英文的区别，因为中文里习惯说虽然。。。但是。。。，英语里用了though就不能用but
意思为：那个时候，虽然我们很穷，快乐和阳光却总是充满了我们小小的家。
最后全文熟背。
友情提醒：
这里给出的不是用来应付考试的范文，也不是什么中考范文，中考范文有中考范文的，应该针对性地按照中考评分标准来指导。这个只是练习作文的一个方法，体会模仿知道好的英语作文是怎么样的，然后慢慢自己知道怎么写。
应付考试我不赞成。正常情况下考试反应出的还是孩子的真实水平，所以要一步一脚印的学习。
那种应付考试的做法是很容易豁边的，太冒险。.
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