29楼不二周助
(学习Nativity Ode)
发表于 2008-8-23 21:48
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Model of persuasive letter
I have read a fantastic book that I would like to recommand to all the girls. Why do I say it is fantastic and just for girls?
First and most important, the story is perfect. It is about a little unicorn lost in the terrible enchanted forest and how Maddie, Sabastain and the other friends helped to find unicorn's parents and the herd.
Second, the book is written by a famous author Carol Barton who always likes to write stories about girls.
Third, the illustration is very attractive and so girlish. The pages are filled with pinky sparkling pictures. EVERYTHING IS PINK. The unicorn is so cute that made you feel want to have a ride on it.
At last, no matter what kind of girls you are, you may find a character in the book is like you, brave girls, clever girls or beautiful girls...
It is a wonderful book and worth reading,isn't it? IT IS UNICORN WISHES!
作者:我女儿 年龄:三年级
If you try to persuade readers, you need to arrange your reasons in order of their importance. The writer (my daughter)chose to begin with the most persuasive point: the story is perfect. and she ends with the least important point: you may find a character in the book is like you.
Another effective way of using the importance is to save the most persuasive for last.
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