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[外语] 英语教学新概念:学以致用 (关于写作及点评 88#---96#)

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Hello, boys and girls. This is our Shanghai Animal Zoo. There are a lot of animals in it. The monkeys, elephants, lions and so on. You can see our zoo is very big. In our zoo you can photo with tigers, housers. In the end, you can see the interesting performance with monkeys, dogs, and elephants. They are both very lovely. I am looking forward to enjoying yourselves.

---By W.

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Dear my children,

Hello, my children. How are you? You will leave me and go to anywhere. But you must the wolf carefully. And when you will build the house, you must used bricks to build your house. And the wolf was very bad. It wants to eat you. You must careful and careful.

Be careful! My Children.

                                             Your mother
                                                   Xxxx

---By W.

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回复 69#渺渺眯眯 的帖子

听背就是:听CD,不看书复述吗?.

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The camel
The camel is a mammal. There are two kinds of camels, one only has one hump another has two. The humps store fat. They are all live in the desert. It has three stomachs. One is store water so it can bear hungry and thirsty for half a month. One is store food, such as hay, grass, leaves and so on. And the other one doesn’t store any thing, it’s only can digest(消化) food.
The camel has many stomachs so it can’t die in hungry.
If somebody is thirsty, he/she can kill the camel and cleave(割开) its stomach. After that, he/she can drink the water in its stomach if he/she is not mind(介意).
The camel’s nostril can open and close by itself. Its with some thick pad(肉垫) on the feet like a cat. People called it “the ship in the desert”.

By S. H.

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Protect kiwi, please!

Kiwi is a lovely popular bird, who only live in New Zealand. Why do New Zealanders like kiwi so much? Here is a story about it. Long long ago, there was a big fire happend in forest. Kiwi suppressed it. In that accident, kiwi lose it’s beautiful feathers. It became nervous and ugly, so it come out at night without feathers, hardly to fly. What a poor bird! So we should try our best to protect kiwi.

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回复 105#小虎快跑 的帖子

问一下,羽毛是可数名词吗?----------S.

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...This is a hook which has material and feathers tied on to it. ...

...of tearing open the hides of dead animals with ease. Bare heads with few feathers enable them to reach into carcases of dead animals without becoming matted with blood. ...

...farmed in South Africa and Australia, for their meat as much as for their feathers and hides. The nests of Ostriches, Emus and Rheas are simple scrapes on ...

...figures made of rough weave, their big faces improvised from beads, shells and feathers. They seemed strangely modern, suggestively effective as a sculpture by Picasso; they ...

...with his fleshy Habsburg lips. He is magnificently dressed in damask decorated with peacock feathers, and wears the Order of the Golden Fleece. Note also here the works ...

...its name from the fact that the original owner made trimmings for hats from ostrich feathers. Sadly, the hotel has become a base for large groups of tourists....
  
...in , there would have been signs of a scuffle: dead chickens, scattered feathers. The thief was human. Chola was furious. She went to the edge...

... laid them on the embers to cook, they were ready by the time the feathers had singed and were hardly worth even sharing, except with the twins who insisted ...

  
...rear end of the kite flexes in the manner of a soaring bird's tail feathers. Sewing and tying the bridle is a similar exercise to that of the Diamond ...
  
...their distinctive styles of dress and skin painting. Forest Goblins decorate themselves with colourful feathers, often sticking the quills directly into their skin as Goblins feel little pain....

...Goblins wear exotic war paint, carry war axes and are often decorated with colourful feathers. EQUIPMENT: Forest Goblins are armed with a hand weapon --; often a war...

...cursed loudly. What could you expect from a pup with a mere nine peacock feathers in his eagle helmet's crest? "Are you a man or mouse, ....

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在几篇关于Camel的作品中,W的文章的信息量最大,还有很多不常见到的词汇,很佩服有这么大的词汇量. 一点小建议, People must drink a lot of water. But the camel can’t. 应该注意情态动词的一致. 还有,就是最后,不知道小作者将来是否想吃骆驼肉.

Mi的文章立意比较好, 但对Camel的介绍略少,  J. 的文章也不错,只是最后让人觉得Camel很可怜,因为and we can eat them. Camel都已经帮我们运东西了,还要吃他们,多可怜呀..

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我也觉得音标很难的,小孩的辩音老是错,我也做不来..

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