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孩子迷上摩尔游戏后，我做了一件事情

寒假的时候我无意让孩子玩起了摩尔庄园的游戏，短短20天的时间，孩子已经从一个门外汉到了一个痴迷者的地步，我随时能听见她的嘴里蹦出一些游戏的专业词。每天为了玩会游戏，她是快中求快，作业的质量，学习状态明显下降了许多。对于是否让她继续玩游戏，我思考了很久，最后找了一些有关资料打印下来和她一起分析迷恋游戏的害处，她接受了我的建议，慢慢地在游戏上的时间从少变为零。我知道她的脑子里是还惦记着游戏的，所以我并不杜绝和她谈论一些玩游戏的高招，并想出来一个主意，那就是写篇文章纪念这个过程。我把她认真写下的结果稍微做了一点点修改放上来。
[size=5]   Mole Land[/size]
  [size=5]Well… I'  m  in grade three now, but  I  have to  have so  many extra classes, so my mother always takes me to some schools. So do other students, as you know, My mother also believes that my study life is more boring. One day my mother told me a computer game called Mole Land. That was my first  time hearing of that game. and I didn't even know what the computer game was.Then my father registered a number and played first. because he wanted to tell me how to play it. Then I started to play it on November 23rd ,2008.
       You know  I needed to search the website of [url]www.51mole.com.[/url] Then I registered a number of my own. I was asked to have a nickname for the game, and my friend gave me a nickname:Niya.  It doesn't mean anything ,But  I  like it very much. So I  am Niya on the land. When I entered the game I found that there were already thousands of moles on the land. If you want to play it, you are another mole.There was a very large place called Mole Land . In that picture they were throwing snowballs、reading newspaper and playing with their friends. There was also a map on the left side.
      Oh, that was a factious world where moles can live. First I can click the map.Wow…it was really a big area where there were mole castles, mysterious lake,shopping street,church,school and so on. Of course it is  as same as the real world, but more colour I think, Little moles need to play games, I f they win, they can earn money called mole bean to make a living. That is to say they will havea happy life if they can work very well and earn a lot of money.
     When I began to play it, I had to join some games, so I decided to go fishing, Within the limited time, I earned 100 mole beans, and then I entered the mole castle to sell the icecream, First I learned how to do it, Then I quickly made some for my customers, As last  I  had more than 1500 mole beans . I bought a pet in the pet shop, you know it cost me 1000 mole beans, This weekend I will play chess with other moles, if I win I can earn beans. I have three big houses, so I am going to decorate my houses, and I am going to buy some seeds and if it bears fruits I can sell them in the market , and I can also earn beans, I think I will live better than before.[/size]

[[i] 本帖最后由 violethyq 于 2009-4-29 12:48 编辑 [/i]].

三年级的小朋友写的阿，这么好的英文水平+ 描述[em04].

[quote]原帖由 [i]yvonne_tina[/i] 于 2009-4-29 12:52 发表 [url=http://ww123.net/baby/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=4928626&ptid=4636337][img]http://ww123.net/baby/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
三年级的小朋友写的阿，这么好的英文水平+ 描述[em04] [/quote]
这篇文章前后写了一周。.

MARK一下，MS我身边听说的小孩都玩这个着迷过头了.

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俺家的也是三年级， 也迷上这个， 但是给他一年都写不出这个E文作文来， 差距啊[tt28].